https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 07:40:03 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140638 Thu, 24 Nov 2005 06:11:30 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140638 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140403 Wed, 23 Nov 2005 07:14:25 +0000
mystic]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club mysticmoonangel https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140403 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140140 Tue, 22 Nov 2005 06:49:19 +0000
Try to give it more body/feeling/information.....]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mike https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140140 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140135 Tue, 22 Nov 2005 06:28:57 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-140135 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-139076 Thu, 17 Nov 2005 05:29:22 +0000
Twelve hours ago i knew pain
twelve hours ago i knew fright
twelve hours ago i knew fault
it was mine

everything i am
everything i thought i was
i lost myself in you

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tell me what y'all think]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-139076 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137682 Wed, 09 Nov 2005 06:44:18 +0000
thanks for posting]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nolongerme https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137682 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137571 Tue, 08 Nov 2005 22:21:34 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Dan T. https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137571 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137495 Tue, 08 Nov 2005 16:17:20 +0000
Does it need to be longer? I thought it was very short.

Best,


A :-)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137495 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137436 Tue, 08 Nov 2005 08:43:04 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137436 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137410 Tue, 08 Nov 2005 06:26:51 +0000
I think if you pursue this more, you'll have a great story to tell.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Mike https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/twelve-hours/#post-137410