https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 09:05:17 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73646 Mon, 25 Oct 2004 06:27:47 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73646 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73387 Fri, 22 Oct 2004 01:46:37 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club packingfoam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73387 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73359 Thu, 21 Oct 2004 21:05:37 +0000
You could say...

I remember days gone by
Making plans for you and I
The red sky turns to black and fades to dawn

While others worked we just played
Enjoyed the moment of the day
Until we noticed that it was all gone

Also...it needs some kinda chorus in it. Do you have any thoughts on that?]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73359 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73162 Wed, 20 Oct 2004 02:13:02 +0000
I believe the correct spelling is 'plagiarising', or 'plagiarizing' if you're American. Playjurising if you can't spell, mind.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Good https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73162 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73157 Wed, 20 Oct 2004 01:49:52 +0000
I believe the correct spelling is 'plagiarising', or 'plagiarizing' if you're American.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club packingfoam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73157 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73154 Wed, 20 Oct 2004 01:18:47 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club DillyDally https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-73154 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-4435 Tue, 19 Oct 2004 20:27:14 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club packingfoam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/under-the-red-sky/#post-4435