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                        <title>RE: Untitled a sof yet PLEASE HELP!!</title>
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                        <pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2004 13:57:51 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[I&#039;m struggling to get hold of it. Any chance we could get to listen?A :-)]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[I'm struggling to get hold of it. Any chance we could get to listen?<br><br><br>A :-)]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>Alan Green</dc:creator>
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                        <title>RE: Untitled a sof yet PLEASE HELP!!</title>
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                        <pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2004 13:16:49 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[I don&#039;t know, hey. I think the song may be a little too non-sequetor for my liking. I just can&#039;t get a grasp of what you are trying to say. Perhaps this is the style that you intended on wri...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[I don't know, hey. I think the song may be a little too non-sequetor for my liking. I just can't get a grasp of what you are trying to say. Perhaps this is the style that you intended on writing in (a dream-pop kinda thing), but personally I need more information in the lyrics to help paint a picture in my head of what the song's about. It's as though the song consists purely of imagery, which may make sense for you, but simply confuses the listener who needs SOME kind of linear structure to it. These are just my thoughts...I don't know. What genre are you writing in?]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>dirtgrrl</dc:creator>
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                        <title>Untitled a sof yet PLEASE HELP!!</title>
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                        <pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2004 05:48:01 +0000</pubDate>
                        <description><![CDATA[The world is a canvasthe world is a stageThe world is inconsequentialThe world is grey(paint my tradgedies away)chorus-I am alone alonealiveI am alone afraidto dieI am alone alonealiveI am t...]]></description>
                        <content:encoded><![CDATA[The world is a canvas<br>the world is a stage<br>The world is inconsequential<br>The world is grey<br>(paint my tradgedies away)<br><br>chorus-I am alone alone<br>alive<br>I am alone afraid<br>to die<br>I am alone alone<br>alive<br>I am the moth on the windowpane<br><br>Awoken again<br>Children if the ashes<br>Fallen from the heavens<br>Haunting, alone together<br>together<br>we say<br>alone<br><br>(repeat chorus)<br>bridge- The skies fall at your command at our command they fall<br><br>Without a doubt, very different from what I normally write. COMPLETELY random inspiration, I haven't posted in a while, but I've got a tune for this and everything.]]></content:encoded>
						                            <category domain="https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/">Guitar Noise Songwriting Club</category>                        <dc:creator>panchromatic</dc:creator>
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