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Don't know how I missed that. :oops:
Consider it done.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Tokai 12 String https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/voices/#post-74622 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/voices/#post-74591 Tue, 02 Nov 2004 22:30:48 +0000
My only change would be to the line:

Or can I live your life Just calling her a friend

I would just change it to my life.

I likey!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/voices/#post-74591 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/voices/#post-4681 Tue, 02 Nov 2004 03:47:06 +0000 Here is a song that I been reworking.
I wrote it about 10 years ago, Let me know what you think, all comments welcome.

VOICES
I had a dream she got away from me
And she was everything I wanted her to be
But now my nights just seem to fade into the days
And in my head the voices say...Don't close your eyes


Don't close your eyes tonight
'Cause nightmares will steal your dreams
And you'll be awaken by your screams
Don't close your eyes to night
'Cause she may pass this way
Listen to the voices when they say
Don't close your eyes


Do I want to take the chance On losing her again
Or can I live my life just calling her a friend
And what if some one else tries taking her away
when in my head the voices say...Take another chance


Take another chance tonight
And you may win her heart
You've got to be willing to play your part
Take another chance tonight
Don't let her get away
Listen to the voices when they say
Take another chance

Bridge:
I love to make to make her Laugh, Just to hear her voice
And deep inside my heart she's my only choice.

Take another chance tonight
And you may win her heart
You've got to be willing to play your part
Take another chance tonight
Don't let her get away
Listen to the voices when they say
Take another chance]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Tokai 12 String https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/voices/#post-4681