https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 08:27:49 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64404 Tue, 03 Aug 2004 03:36:05 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club E.Sherman https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64404 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64377 Mon, 02 Aug 2004 19:59:39 +0000
I like the change on the Bridge Omega. I will see if I can come up with a different rhyme enstead of all 4 running together. I agree it could get boring to the ear.

Sherm- I do have the basic chord progression on this, but haven't settled on the rythm of it. I would love to do some collab stuff. I'm definately open to the idea. I am in the West Suburbs of Chicago in a city called Aurora. Wayne's World....Wayne's World....!

If you want to discuss further feel free to drop me an email. gregmilam2@comcast.net. Look forward to hearing from ya!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64377 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64365 Mon, 02 Aug 2004 09:17:25 +0000
EDIT- hey, I noticed you live around Chicago? Where do you live?



Your not my bandmate...are you? ;p]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club E.Sherman https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64365 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64330 Sun, 01 Aug 2004 10:24:36 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club guy_d https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64330 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64241 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 23:19:43 +0000
All I could really suggest is the Break/last verse maybe changed around a little, asI feel its four rhymes that all sound the same, which may or may not be a bit much on the ears. Then again, its what sounds right for you....

Another thing though, just because Im picky, is I'ld have in this :


Wonder why they don't see right through you
Or maybe they do and they have fooled you
The masquerade of the man continues
Hiding what is really in you

I'ld change that to:


Wonder why they don't see right through you
Or maybe they do and they have you fooled
The masquerade of the man continues
Hiding what is really in you

As it stops the 2 'you's on the end, and it reads nicer. :D

Anyway, they're just my thoughts, its a very good effort. :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Omega https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-64241 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-2951 Fri, 30 Jul 2004 22:31:05 +0000
I would welcome some feedback/ideas to make it better.

What Have You Got To Prove?

Verse 1
You hide behind personality
Never come close to reality
You live it up in social lies
Never revealing your disguise

The ego hides a searching heart
Should have been right from the start
Now the games they never end
Never knowing where to begin

Chorus
No one knows what's inside
Old worlds linger in the new
No one knows the things you hide
What have you got to prove?

Verse 2
The velvet words; this echoed place
Outstretched arms without a face
Say exactly what they want you to
The spotlight shining down on you

Chorus

Bridge
Wonder why they don't see right through you
Or maybe they do and they have fooled you
The masquerade of the man continues
Hiding what is really in you

Chorus]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/what-have-you-got-to-prove/#post-2951