https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 20:15:42 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66888 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 19:32:36 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66888 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66858 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 09:51:28 +0000
hey nite, that was a real nice touch by gmilam. try that.. :)]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club alterego https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66858 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66799 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 01:02:12 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66799 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66797 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 00:55:14 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66797 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66793 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 00:25:32 +0000
Can you explain something for me though, what exactly is "Potter's field?" Is it something like a pauper's grave? I've seen the phrase used before, but only by Americans.....

Vic.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66793 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66792 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 00:22:46 +0000 FInd more creative ways to say in the verses like...


The whiskey (alcohol) had a grasp so tight.

When the whiskey (dragon) finally took his life

The whiskey (demon) had a grasp so tight

These aren't great examples, but you need something else to describe it.

Just a thought for the last line of the chorus

"And the whiskey thinking managed to win out every time"

maybe you could leave a little more air in that line by saying

"And the whiskey thinking... won out every time"

just an idea...]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club gmilam https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66792 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66791 Sat, 28 Aug 2004 00:12:45 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66791 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66785 Fri, 27 Aug 2004 22:47:42 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club alterego https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66785 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66782 Fri, 27 Aug 2004 22:26:43 +0000 great lyrics man liked the line Like a person lost in a dense forest
He dissapeared before his eyes. However, use "whiskey" maybe a few less times coz it gets kinda nagging to see it crop up in every other line. I'm sure u won't lose the essence. Infact it'll highten the phrase "whiskey thinking". Nice one.
The rest is great!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club alterego https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66782 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66781 Fri, 27 Aug 2004 22:24:37 +0000 great lyrics man liked the line Like a person lost in a dense forest
He dissapeared before his eyes. However, use "whiskey" maybe a few less times coz it gets kinda nagging to see it crop up in every other line. I'm sure u won't lose the essence. Infact it'll highten the phrase "whiskey thinking". Nice one.
The rest is great!]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club alterego https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/whiskey-thinking/#post-66781