https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Fri, 05 Jun 2026 10:34:08 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-248232 Thu, 14 Jun 2007 23:24:17 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club jaa9270 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-248232 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-248224 Thu, 14 Jun 2007 22:28:34 +0000 iswhy I'm getting lost in the metaphor and can't seem to make it work! I need to develope the other side more! Thank you! *very exuberant*

And, by the way, yeah, that is more or less the message I was going for. i think it's about deciding whether or not to risk a sure thing (like a stable lifestyle) for something better, or true happiness. Needs a lot of work, but I think that's the problem I was having, why I was stuck. Thanks again.]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club saint_duud https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-248224 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-247594 Tue, 12 Jun 2007 03:54:01 +0000
like here:
It's a beautiful day
Other side of the glass
But I don't want to
Be out there in the cold
Be out there in the rain
And it's a beautiful life
On the wrong side of the glass
But I'm alone and it's getting dark
Please don't leave me out here in the cold and rain

that sorta confuses the position (which side of the glass) you're tryna portray.

i think if you are tryna decribe both sides then you should develop both equally (you're leaning towards the outside).

detail the inside more. list the pros and cons (namely, why it's such a "beautiful life")

i'd like to know what the overlying theme is. i think it's about deciding whether or not to risk a sure thing (like a stable lifestyle) for something better, or true happiness. am i close?]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club jaa9270 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-247594 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-246795 Fri, 08 Jun 2007 04:16:55 +0000 i wrote 16 songs in a year...and 1 song in the last 4 months :?
its depressing and hugely annoying isnt it!! when you get one line that you think, wow! im gonna run with that! and you sit there and no more lines come...

*violins start playing sob tunes in background*

:lol:]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club coleclark https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-246795 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-246775 Fri, 08 Jun 2007 02:03:44 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club saint_duud https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-246775 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-241200 Fri, 04 May 2007 21:08:42 +0000 Guitar Noise Songwriting Club saint_duud https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-241200 https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-25465 Fri, 04 May 2007 01:56:50 +0000
Yesterday's rain
I shouldn't claim to know the answers
As I'm sitting here, eyes to the window
Out there's a gray-silver sky
And the wind is tossing people's hair and jackets
And the world is green from yesterday's rain

I feel lost

Chorus:
It's a beautiful day
Other side of the glass
But I don't want to
Be out there in the cold
Be out there in the rain
And it's a beautiful life
On the wrong side of the glass
But I'm alone and it's getting dark
Please don't leave me out here in the cold and rain

I don't claim to know the answers
Looking out the window, dreaming I'm not alone
The rain pounds the blacktop and concrete
And glistens on a world of hope and possibility
And I'm starting to see through the haze of yesterday's rain

Bridge:
It's beautiful
Out here in the storm
How could anyone want more
But it's cold
And I'm starting to shake
I feel washed away

Chorus:
It's a beautiful day
Other side of the glass
But I don't want to be
Out there in the cold and rain
And it's a beautiful life
On the wrong side of the glass
But I'm alone and it's getting dark
Please don't leave me out here in the cold and rain

It's a beautiful life
On the wrong side of the glass
I'm alone and it's getting dark
Don't leave me out here in the rain
It's a beautiful life
But it's getting dark
Please let me come in out of the rain
It's a beautiful life...
Don't leave me out in the rain...]]> Guitar Noise Songwriting Club saint_duud https://guitarnoise.forum/guitar-noise-songwriting-club/yesterdays-rain/#post-25465