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Some constructive advice: The first solo could be a bit more interesting from start to finish if you start a line by working off a recognizable sequence of notes from the melody and then take it somewhere else in either variations or a competely avant-garde direction. Then occasionally return to a sequence of reconizable Take-5 notes to re-ground, then "run off and play" again. This helps the listener stay interested and engaged, just to see where you will take the little excusions. The unstructured soloing works perfectly as is the second time, especially because it is a short outro and there is no time for the listener to drift or lose interest.

As Hue says, your playing has really progressed nicely. Great job!]]> Hear Here gnease https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-239322 https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-239321 Sun, 22 Apr 2007 06:46:21 +0000
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I listened to some other songs you have there, too.


GREAT JOB on Hold The Line. TOTO will always be one of my most treasured bands and you guys did it well!!!]]> Hear Here Bish https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-238912 https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-238909 Thu, 19 Apr 2007 21:37:43 +0000 Hear Here cnev https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-238909 https://guitarnoise.forum/hear-here/take-5/#post-238890 Thu, 19 Apr 2007 18:58:47 +0000
IMO, you could bring the guitar level up further in front of the other stuff.

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