https://guitarnoise.forum/singing/vocal-critique/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 12:23:57 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/singing/vocal-critique/#post-257246 Mon, 30 Jul 2007 08:35:24 +0000
pretty good, like you said 'listenable'
went flat in quite a few places in the songs, just needs a little more control over the notes, you hit them well but dont quite hold them cleanly.

its a good mix of songs, good to show vocal skills.

you know what i reckon would make a huge difference? and it takes a bit of doing, but you need more life in your voice, i know you would have been concentrating on the notes while recording these but for 3 out of the 4 it sounds like your very bored and maybe thinking about what your gonna do after your done here, maybe some shopping go to freinds house etc...you know what i mean? the one different one is 'stop breaking down' and you put feeling into that one, its makes it stand out. so maybe find what you relate to in the song, why you like the song and focus on that while singing to motivate you. good singers can put so much feeling into there songs and that will keep an audience enthused and listening.

i really think that with more feeling it could take it from good singing to great singing

harry]]> Singing coleclark https://guitarnoise.forum/singing/vocal-critique/#post-257246 https://guitarnoise.forum/singing/vocal-critique/#post-27164 Sat, 28 Jul 2007 08:44:34 +0000
Just pick whatever song suits your fancy.

Stop Breaking Down (Robert Johnson)
http://www.box.net/shared/lue9b2kxri

Do (White Stripes)
http://www.box.net/shared/v3mq1bj5vz

So Long Cruel World (Blanche)
http://www.box.net/shared/2t1cjy7eiy

Say It Aint So (Weezer)
http://www.box.net/shared/q64yxg1zr9]]> Singing elpantalla https://guitarnoise.forum/singing/vocal-critique/#post-27164