https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 10:28:42 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87814 Tue, 01 Feb 2005 22:14:00 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87814 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87777 Tue, 01 Feb 2005 18:58:56 +0000
as I said I liked it before ... you did a hell of a job rewriting!
and it's wonderful, a more coherent image now instead of patchwork(which I liked, too!). amazing lines...
great how the '4linechoruspart' changes and repeats.

very well done.
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87777 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87724 Tue, 01 Feb 2005 10:20:03 +0000
there's a line in a bob dylan song, -not dark yet-, that goes, "i still got the scars that the sun didn't heal."]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87724 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87546 Mon, 31 Jan 2005 00:44:31 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87546 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87543 Mon, 31 Jan 2005 00:30:07 +0000
Well to honest this just don't work for me " SORRY " but it seeems to me just to be lyrics that flow together , there is no story to this and I can not understand what you are saying .

sorry


cheers
L.K
:arrow:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87543 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87490 Sun, 30 Jan 2005 18:15:54 +0000
I like it :D
first 2 verses kinda remind me of Jonas(great music..band doesn't really exist anymore).
I'm very fond of the references to gums.

nice writing;)
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-87490 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-6751 Sun, 30 Jan 2005 02:10:17 +0000
broken glass is in my head
cutting up my thoughts to shreds
memories of those broken nights
promises broken and so many fights
like sirens and lights
on blue and white cars
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars

now i'm alone and all i see
are restless eyes staring back through me
all i hear are the flapping gums
of lonely crowds whose words won't come
just vacant and numb
in a beer and rum bar
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars

well, you can take up shelter to collect your wits
and wait one more day before calling it quits
but there's no wrong but the right
to burn out what was bright
like one tiny light
in an ocean of stars
time heals all wounds
let the sun heal the scars]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/3-12-cheers/#post-6751