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Thanks for all the advice
I have decided to go with
2am
Desert Tears ( which I have remixed a bit to make it better )
and
Just Whispers in a dream,
which no one has yet to hear... it is from the SSG 28 week (I think ) I have sent it to Adam and will let you know when it is up ok.

hold thumbs for me ok
Go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61375 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61127 Sun, 23 May 2004 21:52:21 +0000
Sorry it's taken me a while to get back to you. I would agree with 2 am, that's for sure, but I'd be tempted to pick either Emerald Eyes or When I'm Sleeping for a second song and I believe in Wishing Wells for the third place.

I think that would give a pretty good cross section of your stuff some of it showcasing your voice, some of it demonstrating your guitar kills and all of it proving you're a great songwriter.

I sincerely wish you the very best of luck in this, please keep us all informed as to how you get on.

Bob :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61127 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61115 Sun, 23 May 2004 14:34:31 +0000
Between the two song writing forums and people here i have asked ,so far it is

2am 4 votes
Desert Tears 4 votes
Portraits of sunset 2 votes
Faeries and rainbows 2 votes
The Heart song 2 vote
for the first time 2 votes
I believe in wish wells 2 vote
Even when I'm sleeping 2 votes
Which way does the wind blow 1 vote


Any other opinions comming for the third place................. Bob ????, Nick ???? David ??? are you still all out there , Marv, Maxwell, ..... I would really appreciate your imput.

go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61115 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61079 Sat, 22 May 2004 04:30:16 +0000 Desert tears: Chord progression seems jumpy, needs a bit ambient bass less boxy sounding
* Faeries; very pleasent. Needs more ambient guitar, feels like there should be a little tamborine in the background, has a medieval feel.
First time: needs a little clean up (hisssss) didn't hit a groove for me.
*Heart Song: I really like the chords on this, there should be a flute in there.
I Believe: Very nice; I keep hearing a light voice that should be harmonizing in the background like a mist.
Which way Wind: Nice imagery, flows nicely. Childs voice should be a little quieter, perhaps in the left speaker as you sing in the right, then switches back to normal?

Just my humble opinion from doing mixing the past couple years. Anyway the one with the stars are the ones I pick. Love your voice, very silky and matches the style well.

I posted a reply before signing in (hence above)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Sigil https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61079 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61076 Sat, 22 May 2004 04:06:59 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61076 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61069 Fri, 21 May 2004 23:02:29 +0000
2 A.M.
Which way does the wind blow

It's too hard to choose between these, but one of them should be included:

I believe in Wishing Wells
Faeries and Rainbows
Desert Tears

All of those three are very good. Desert Tears though, is a bit of a departure from your usual style. So I don't know if including it would

a) not represent your style very accurately ... or
b) demonstrate your versatility.

I just don't know anything at all about record companies or the music industry in general. I only know there's a world of great music out there that I never get to hear because of them.

Anyways, those are my personal faves. Once you get a disc published, you're going to let us know how to get it, right?

-- Scratch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group scratchmonkey https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-61069 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-2464 Fri, 21 May 2004 22:20:59 +0000 If you have heard any of my songs on Adams site..... which 3 (maximum ) would you pick.

i want to take a majority vote on this one... as my choices are definately not other peoples and I need to get this one right !!!
So please help if you can.... if you need the link to Adam it is

http://mp3.moosoft.net/jamir

Thanks very much.

Ja'mir :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/advice-needed-from-the-members-guests/#post-2464