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baby were you?

but there would be a small pause between baby and were you.

That way it matches a little closer syllable wise to your original line.

TheJackal]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TheJackal https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-64137 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-64116 Thu, 29 Jul 2004 11:01:29 +0000
I wasn't satisfied
and you weren't either

there are the same number of syllables, but not sure if it futs with the melody.

-CheapThrill]]> Sunday Songwriters Group CheapThrill https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-64116 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-64115 Thu, 29 Jul 2004 10:51:26 +0000 I wonder how I hadn't noticet that stupid ... However.
Ok. Thanks for the remark.
I think that this would do it with the melody and syllables:

I wasn't satisfied
And neither you

But is really sounds a little bit worse.If youcan suggest sth else welcvome
But I insist on this "I wasn't satisfied" line to stay]]> Sunday Songwriters Group George_ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-64115 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-63937 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 20:42:25 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group EddyGL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-63937 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-63931 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 20:24:39 +0000
Only fault I can find, is in the first verse..

I wasn't satisfied
And so were you

Should probably be

I wasn't satisfied
And neither were you

Or something similar, just a matter of matching a negative with a negative]]> Sunday Songwriters Group EddyGL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-63931 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-2900 Mon, 26 Jul 2004 17:59:55 +0000
Ve1:
I remember in my life
Some days of blue
I wasn't satisfied
And so were you
Those days've passed away
But what will ensue
Before the present day is through

Re:
High or low
Although life - it is too short
I'm gonna stand and carry on
All yor dreams
Someday are gonna take wings
And gonna fly beyond the wall

Ve2:
You're standing by my side
Beneath the rising sun
And I am satisfied
And we're as one
Today I feel allright
But what is goin' to come
Before this present day is gone

Re:
High or low
Although life - it is too short
I'm gonna stand and carry on
All yor dreams
Someday are gonna take wings
And gonna fly beyond the wall

They're gonna fly beyond the wall ...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group George_ https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/and-what-about-this-one/#post-2900