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Joe]]> Sunday Songwriters Group buyguy2001 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56151 Re: check out my song https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56150 Thu, 01 Jan 2004 21:59:00 +0000
"Couldn't remember to miss you" is a very good line.

Oh, yeah, negative criticism. Hm...

Maybe you could refrase it a little. "I forgot to miss you" would be easier to sing.

Keep on writing, this song sure has a soul.
Chris.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Christiaan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56150 Re: check out my song https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56149 Thu, 01 Jan 2004 08:40:48 +0000 i guess i'll have to work on my suckiness :P]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Fawn_Chino https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56149 Re: check out my song https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56148 Thu, 01 Jan 2004 07:56:56 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-56148 check out my song https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-1590 Mon, 29 Dec 2003 03:22:13 +0000
this day,
contempt with the misplaced,
forgot to choose erase,
i swear i tried.
Couldnt remember to miss you,
a limitless issue,
yah i guess i lied

could i forget
could i upset
would i
dont make me try

someday,
ill shoot for the wrong way
instead of your right way,
play pretend, im blind.
Shouldnt change what it came to,
an honored salute to
my damaged pride.

could i forget
could i upset
would i
dont make me try
-sheena

iève changed my mind, neg criticism will help me learn]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Fawn_Chino https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/check-out-my-song/#post-1590