https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 13:11:55 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-65063 Fri, 13 Aug 2004 18:37:10 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-65063 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-65051 Fri, 13 Aug 2004 15:34:07 +0000 He loved Jack Daniels and loved doing bongs it sticks out from the rest of the song and also will take up a longer time to sing than the others so it will most likely sound awkward. Also with V5 try making it 4 lines long jusst like the previouse stanzas if you can, its not the end of the world if you don't though.
We got it together
Gave a guitar solo
Sent the crowd to the ceiling
Then an awsome drumroll in this stanza im just not grabbed by the lyrics. how about

We got it together,
blazed through the solo,
the crowd hit the cieling,
finished with a drumroll.

you don't have to change it cuz it's just my suggestion. Good luck with the songs and I hope you stay at guitarnoise.com.

bstguitarist
:lol:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group bstguitarist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-65051 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-3091 Thu, 12 Aug 2004 06:47:10 +0000 Our time to shine
At the target center
Waitin in line
v2
Never been a headliner
One song shot us to the top
We were livin our dream
We were ready to rock
chorus
Johnny our lead singer
First love wasnt a song
He loved Jack Daniels and loved doing bongs
As we were getting ready
To make it on time
Johnny was in the back
Doing to many lines
v3
Our time came up
We were ready to roll
Johnny came out singing
Gave his heart and his soul
v4
(spoken)
When it came to our one song
That everybody knew
Johnny stumbeled and he fumbuld
Like he didnt have a clue
v5
I put down my guitar
And dragged him off the stage
His mind was so messed up
The fans went into a rage
chorus
Johnny our lead singer
First love wasnt a song
He loved Jack Daniels and loved doing bongs
As we were out rockin
Johnny was passed out on the back bar
He missed his one shot at being a star
v6
We got it together
Gave a guitar solo
Sent the crowd to the ceiling
Then an awsome drumroll
(Spoken)
Johnny missed the party of the year
When he woke up, said hell,
Give me a shot and a beer]]> Sunday Songwriters Group nitetrapper https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/finally-got-a-shot-wk-40/#post-3091