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Joe]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103993 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103991 Thu, 26 May 2005 02:59:24 +0000
Joe]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103991 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103836 Wed, 25 May 2005 05:52:51 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103836 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103546 Mon, 23 May 2005 17:27:00 +0000
Thanks for using one of my titles.

Grace was suppose to be a much longer but I selfish decided to keep the longer version for my own use .

Sorry :oops:

What I liked about the single word Grace was the fact that it had multiole meanings. You managed to use two with Grace as a woman's name and that wonderful "Fall from Grace" line at the end. EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!

I agree with Bob about the Rhyme scheme but think some line switching may be possible. Or at least I'll give it a try.

Maybe something like:

Her wanton cries so dutiful
Oh Grace has me hypnotized
Her sparkling eyes so beautiful
So completely paralyzed

I don't know Does that work or not?

Thanks again

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103546 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103525 Mon, 23 May 2005 15:17:05 +0000
Good start - the last part of the chorus is excellent "Fall From Grace" good writing.

There's a conflict of rhyming scheme it starts off AABB and ends ABAB. I think you need to sort that out so it flows better. I just tried swapping the lines around but it doesn't really work that way.

Good start

Bob :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-103525 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-9247 Mon, 23 May 2005 07:48:35 +0000
Oh it's Grace that has me hypnotized
So completely paralyzed
Her sparkling eyes so beautiful
Her wanton cries so dutiful

Her curves completely natural
Adorned in satin and lace
And when she screams it's a matter of time
Before I fall from Grace]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/grace-the-celt/#post-9247