ode to gn - Sunday Songwriters Group

Re: ode to gn

Bob — Sun, 28 May 2006 16:46:13 +0000

Bob tells me what to write about
There are times I just want to scream and shout Ahh a mention at last - seems to have worked for you this week mate

Bob :wink:

RE: ode to gn

BarnaBus RoX — Tue, 23 May 2006 11:34:04 +0000

Ok oK old boy

Ill edit that line to read like this ....mmmm ( anything for the King lol )

"We can all learn , learn you see
So log on now and come with me
Meet my fiends , there are many
Best of all it won't cost a p e n n y "

Thanks for the feed back

Hilch :?:

RE: ode to gn

lotto king — Tue, 23 May 2006 08:11:52 +0000

Hey cut it out now you bloody show off

3 songs in 2 todays ? Look out Vic this bloke is after you record what was is now 7 songs in 5 days ?

Why does anyone have to look out for me ... I AM OLD MAN .....bugger you hilch

Here I am being nice to you , you cheeky bugger ...

I don't like the look out for Mr King line , I don't think it flows as well as the rest of that verse ..

"I just want to write that hit
Mostly I write a pile of sh...... "

Why do you constantly put ya self down like that ? I think you might have a confidence problem myself ..

Ok this isn't the best song you have posted nor is it the worst ( mind you it is down there )

Mum and Time were beautifully written songs , definetly not piles of sh.... ( as you put it )

News flash Hilch you are a song writter along with everyone else here .... Get used to being called it , while you write songs like I mentioned

Your status as a writter heightens ...( now thats a good line )

L.K

RE: ode to gn

Bennett — Tue, 23 May 2006 03:54:12 +0000

Couldn't wait 'til next week, huh Hilchy?! LOL!Nice little fun piece there. Well done mate! :D

ode to gn

BarnaBus RoX — Tue, 23 May 2006 02:59:54 +0000

Here I sit in my chair
There you are starring back at me
Bob tells me what to write about
There are times I just want to scream and shout

Log on to Guitar Noise dot com
I know everyone will leave me alone
I 'll try to write that wonderful song
Knowing me it will take so long

I just want to write that hit
Mostly I write a pile of sh......
People will give advise
Value for money it's the price

We can all learn , learn you see
So log on now and come with me
Meet my fiends , there are many
Just beware of Mr K i n g<--Best of all it won't cost a p e n n y "

Log on to Guitar Noise dot com
I know everyone will leave me alone
I 'll try to write that wonderful song
Knowing me it will take so long

Log on log on

log on