https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/re-ssg2-week-8/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 08:16:58 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/re-ssg2-week-8/#post-56101 Tue, 30 Dec 2003 09:10:18 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/re-ssg2-week-8/#post-56101 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/re-ssg2-week-8/#post-1568 Sun, 28 Dec 2003 03:33:00 +0000 What I like best is the strong voice throughout, which you establish with "had me", "aint", "sure as hell" and "this fool."

Maybe, in the first verse, second line, change "started" to "headed"?

Funny twist at the end.

Keep it up,
silly putty]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/re-ssg2-week-8/#post-1568