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I like the second one-isn't a downer at all:)


Angry child of mine where will you go
The slamming of the door still lingers here...
I'm sitting on the broken stairs, bite my fingers
who else could fix me
or am I already too destroyed to be repaired?

Sooner than I thought I miss your anger
yeah it hurt me
but without your stinging words, it is even worse

what do you think?hope I didn't screw it up.
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-25-copper-cable-2/#post-59804 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-25-copper-cable-2/#post-2209 Tue, 27 Apr 2004 18:58:31 +0000
Not that the demand would be great, but it helps my own personal ego!

*grin*


ONE:
If I were a guitar strumming from your radio
Would my harmony remind you of your distant home?

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TWO:
Angry child of mine where will you go
The slamming of the door still lingers here...

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THREE (just so they aren't all downers):
Golden hair in the morning sun
On my pillow, love's newly won...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Copper_Cable https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-25-copper-cable-2/#post-2209