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I like it:)))somehow strange to see the own words put together to something different-anyway I think it's an excellent idea to use these 'meadow lines'...fits very well...
only thing I don't really like is the chorus(the end with the meadow is ok but...)-only my opinion.

what if you use these instead:
Have I been abandoned from Heaven
already before the fall of the moon
will you leave me here in the meadow alone?
In the meadow
In the meadow
In the meadow where you are not...

thanx
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-26-in-the-meadow/#post-59805 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-26-in-the-meadow/#post-2208 Tue, 27 Apr 2004 18:56:12 +0000
How about this combination/lyric. Thanks to bluenightangel and brainiacamour for the moody beginnings.



The flowers rot under my feet
Death lives in the footsteps I leave
In the meadow where you are not
In the meadow I loved and lost

Rain falling like blood from a bone
Missing limb left to mend on its own
In the meadow my soul is lost
In the meadow where you are not

Chorus:
You won't let me write you a letter
and I can't even call on the phone
How did I hurt you
What pain was so strong
to leave me in the meadow alone?
In the meadow
In the meadow
In the meadow where you are not...



The other post seemed to fit for a chorus. Perhaps I should try this by getting both 2-liners in the verse, but I liked where this one went.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Copper_Cable https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-26-in-the-meadow/#post-2208