https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 17:52:14 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126695 Wed, 21 Sep 2005 00:59:48 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Taver https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126695 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126675 Wed, 21 Sep 2005 00:08:58 +0000 I like your song. I havent heard it yet so something to look forward to. I think you should go with Joes suggestions, sometimes whats not said is more powerful than what is.
Joe said: I like the going nowhere part, but I think you can leave off "as" either that or you could use
Though Im going nowhere
My mind starts to wander Overall though a good song, well done :D .

pb]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126675 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126375 Tue, 20 Sep 2005 01:41:17 +0000

And to quote Stephen King, "I've never ever sat down and started to write page one with the foggiest notion of how it's going to turn out"

Glad to see you persevered, Taver, with the couple of little changes suggested above this should be a pretty good song...

:D :D :D

Vic.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126375 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126324 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 23:40:54 +0000 http://www.soundclick.com/taver]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Taver https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126324 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126268 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 20:13:57 +0000
It doesnt matter if you can spell it, as long as you can understand it.

What a wonder it is that I'm not having one of those moments here at work with my moniter looking that way. Goodness knows I've had plenty of them lately at the house.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group gunslinger https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126268 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126213 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 16:38:46 +0000 http://www.soundclick.com/taver soon will have full song.
It's strange how flying came to be. Started off as something totaly different, then over the week it turned into a couple of different things then this weeks SSG helped finish it off.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Taver https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126213 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126192 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 14:56:08 +0000
I can really relate to that day-dreaming imagery. Good theme.

On the spelling thing, you've still got the first "souring" in there. Also, are you "loosing" your cares or "losing"? Could be either I suppose.

Looking forward to hearing one of your songs, as I haven't come across any of your Mp3s yet. have you got any on the net anywhere?

Cheers, Chris]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Chris C https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126192 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126176 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 13:14:29 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Taver https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126176 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126169 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 11:57:13 +0000
Joe covered alot. I cant find anything I would comment on but I would love to hear the final version. Are you going to record it?

Geoo]]> Sunday Songwriters Group geoo https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126169 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126163 Mon, 19 Sep 2005 11:40:34 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Taver https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-46-flying/#post-126163