ssg-week 10 - Joe - Sunday Songwriters Group https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 17:02:35 +0000 wpForo 60 Re: ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56194 Wed, 07 Jan 2004 23:12:34 +0000 Funny stuff.

Keep it up!
- Chris]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Christiaan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56194 Re: ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56193 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 08:56:51 +0000
I agree with PORR on the "anything".

And yes...this was a nice twist on the weeks assignment.  Keep it up Bob.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56193 Re: ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56192 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 01:51:56 +0000 You're absolutely right,  A good suggestion.
Also thanks to SSG for suggesting  we write on other peoples titles. It was unexpected and fun.

Joe]]> Sunday Songwriters Group buyguy2001 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56192 Re: ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56191 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 00:51:11 +0000 maybe look at changing "anything" to "a thing"
- it shortens the number of syllables for that line
- all your rhyming words are 1 syllable except "anything"

just a thought. good job]]> Sunday Songwriters Group P0RR https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56191 Re: ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56190 Mon, 05 Jan 2004 20:07:28 +0000 Right Church, Wrong Pew.

Bob  ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-56190 ssg-week 10 - Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-joe/#post-1603 Mon, 05 Jan 2004 04:13:00 +0000
"Why don't you stay the night"

You been sneekin out all week
Comin' home passed two
I can't get no sleep
And it's all because of you
         Chorus
Why don't you stay the night
So I can get some rest
Why don't you stay the night
I think it might be for the best
Why don't you stay the night
Or maybe don't come home at all!
(Kind of Brooks and Dunnish. Eh?.)

"Right Church, Wrong Pew"

Limousine, diamond ring
Don't think I'm missin anything
Right church, wrong pew
Hey who the hell are you
Right church, wrong pew
I think I'll look for some-one new
Right church, wrong pew
Right church, wrong pew



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