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I like the first 'Why don't you stay the night' best, because the 'I' is giving a pathetic reason - the day's light is fading.
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-Laura]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BlackSwan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56199 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56198 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 09:01:24 +0000 "Starting Last" would work without having the
rhythm I had in mind indicated.  

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Go well
Jamir ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56197 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56196 Mon, 05 Jan 2004 23:56:39 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group P0RR https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56196 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56195 Mon, 05 Jan 2004 20:04:38 +0000 starting last submission - it works well for me.

Bob  ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-56195 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-10-mjbird/#post-1604 Mon, 05 Jan 2004 06:52:37 +0000
Saying please don't go
In this fading day's light.
I can't imagine me without you.
Why don't you stay the night.

Saying please don't go
When this seems so right,
to feel your warmth surround me.
Why don't you stay the night.



-------- Starting Last ----------

Starting last,
I'll get there when I do.
In my marathon,
of forever chasing you.
Let all the others
get there first,
and when their
time is through.
I'll get there for
the happy end
of me with you.
Starting last.

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