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I like the way you have written this, I also like short and to the point, (the lyrics are a bit gruesome though to put it mildly) I have never seen the pic, but the description says it all.
good work
Go well
Jamir ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-12/#post-56433 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-12/#post-1651 Sat, 24 Jan 2004 09:53:14 +0000
Kill 'em All (okay, so I lack originality, lol)

The troops are coming
Moving fast and strong
Destroying all in sight
Death will not take long

pre-chorus:
Get your gun ready
Leave nothing alive
Die slow and steady
Judgement has arrived

chorus:
Annihilation
Takes over your mind
Destroy
No one stays alive
Murder
Leave nothing behind
Genocide
No one will survive

People shout in terror
Bullets mark their flesh
Fire falls from the sky
Burns the town to ash

pre-chorus:
Get your gun ready
Leave nothing alive
Die slow and steady
Judgement has arrived

chorus:
Annihilation
Takes over your mind
Destroy
No one stays alive
Murder
Leave nothing behind
Genocide
No one will survive

A little on the short side but I don't like my music too wordy.  Appreciate your comments on it.
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