https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 19:57:01 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96392 Sat, 02 Apr 2005 08:53:44 +0000 version it ends up as.

Actually aren't there 3 versions of every story?

His, Hers,and the Truth

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96392 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96387 Sat, 02 Apr 2005 08:34:09 +0000
just chuckling over that quote at the end of Celt's posts...."at least 12 versions of every song"....definitely fits here!!!....my 18-y-o daughter thinks you've got a good song here as well, she sees it as more of a Shania Twain country rock thing.....

Hope we aren't cofusing you too much here!!!!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96387 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96360 Sat, 02 Apr 2005 04:28:24 +0000
First of all I would like to apologize for being born male. :oops:

Great song I can see this as country but I agree with Vic about the hard rocker.

Just to add to the confusion the last verse would work very well
as a Rap. Of course then you would most definatly have to go with the "expletive" .

Well, it looks like you got all the bases covered on this one.

I always look foward to reading your work.

Keep it up,

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96360 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96316 Fri, 01 Apr 2005 20:50:05 +0000
:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96316 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96298 Fri, 01 Apr 2005 16:29:15 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group katreich https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96298 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96293 Fri, 01 Apr 2005 15:18:20 +0000
Ohh and probly because I listen to alot of country but I hear it as an upbeat country song. I can see Jo Dee singing this one right after she finishes "My give a dams busted"

:)

Jim]]> Sunday Songwriters Group geoo https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96293 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96275 Fri, 01 Apr 2005 09:30:46 +0000 I've had enough of your abuses
The game is over honey, and you're the one who loses Great way to go out strong. This was my favorite part in the song. I agree with Vic to use the word "junk" just because it does mean worse than clutter. I liked the song. Keep it up!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pierson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96275 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96251 Fri, 01 Apr 2005 05:40:15 +0000
Looks good to me, can see this as a hard-rocker....

I hear you told I was clueless, had my head in a fog
Well honey I'm throwing all your clutter in the back of your truck...

In those two lines I'd change "told" to "said" - it just reads better.....and "clutter" to "junk"....gives an even worse image of the man...good stuff can get cluttered (you ought to see this room!!!!) but junk is just rubbish....

Just my opinion, of course...trying to be constructive rather than destructive....but it's got a good flow, reads well and a good strong title...

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-96251 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-8099 Thu, 31 Mar 2005 21:18:40 +0000
I won't be taken for a ride again
I've had it up to here with you 2- faced men
Don't let the door hit you on your way out
And don't act like you don't know what I'm talking about
I'm tired of spinning my wheels
I'm tired of making bad deals
So hit the road honey, and see how it feels

Chorus:
This time it's my way, or the highway
This girl ain't giving out free rides any more
Don't put your thumb out
Cause I have no doubt
You'll be eating my dust
I'll put the pedal to the floor.

I hear you're sniffing round the neighbor like a mangy old dog
I hear you told I was clueless, had my head in a fog
Well honey I'm throwing all your clutter in the back of your truck
And you can drive on up the road and try your luck
I've had enough of your excuses
I've had enough of your abuses
The game is over honey, and you're the one who loses]]> Sunday Songwriters Group katreich https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-3/#post-8099