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Jimmy Buffet, thats cool.  I never even thought about him.  I had the feel of the music from the beaches of say, Carlsbad (I did time on Camp Pendleton).  But it does sound like something Jimmy Buffet would sing, cool.  I guess only true surfers can get that Cali sound.

Thanks, Yall, for the input.

Later,
         Rbert]]> Sunday Songwriters Group RBERT101 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-57079 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-57078 Thu, 25 Mar 2004 12:17:17 +0000
I like it.  It kinda has a Jimmy Buffett feel to it.  In my head anyways.  So I don't see it as an "aw-shucks" sorta vibe, but more of a "too laid back to care very much" thing.  I like the lyrics, and the tune it plays to in my mind is really quite catchy.  It's perfectly fine to write a song where nobody gets mad.  Good work.

As always, that's just my $0.02.

-- Scratch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-57078 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-57077 Wed, 24 Mar 2004 23:28:53 +0000 i would like to hear a lil more flip floppin between the understandin and aw shucksness...to a lil tinge of bitch i wrote this song for u and u turn without any thanks ...i hope the door smacks ya on the ass on the way out...a lil bitterness for the effort

mudd

that be my small crit...but i can feel the song flow and like the plot of the chorus to the tune of i will get back up ...someday...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group muddy https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-57077 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-1820 Wed, 24 Mar 2004 00:19:03 +0000
This ones got a reggae thing goin on.

She got out of the car  I opened my arms
And saind its good  to see you again
I looked in her eyes  shouldve realized
What kind of trouble  I was in
I wrote her a song  Guess I played it all wrong
Maybe she didnt like  what she heard
She told me goodbye  I think I know why
But I couldnt say  another word

Chorus
Go on girl run away
Ill be right here and Ill be okay
I know what its like to be afraid
Maybe Ill try another day

Look back and I think  as I take a drink
'Bout all the things  I did wrong
Shes still too young  to understand love
And I scared her off  with my song
Guess I dont know  how loves s'posed to go
Guess that Im still  too young too
I can still smile  It was all worth the while
Her memory  could never make me blue

Chorus x 2


Thanks
     Rbert]]> Sunday Songwriters Group RBERT101 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-go-on-girl/#post-1820