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I agree with Homeboy.  The chorus is a bit overdone.  Everything else is fine.  The structure is good, it's consistent throughout, and the chorus itself is good.  But even filet mignon can become tiresome if you get too much of it.  Well.... so I'm told.

-- Scratch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-my-love/#post-57076 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-my-love/#post-57075 Wed, 24 Mar 2004 12:27:28 +0000
]]> Sunday Songwriters Group homeboy_hug https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-my-love/#post-57075 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-21-my-love/#post-1819 Wed, 24 Mar 2004 10:23:59 +0000
"My Love"

V1
From the moment I met you
I knew you were the one to see through
You starred right past my eyes
And glimpsed at me deep inside

CHORUS
Images of you
My love, my love
Smiling at me
My love, my love

The beauty of us
My love, my love
Will never be
My love, my love

V2
The way you sit and listen to me
It makes me feel so interesting
I wanna crawl inside your mind
And see what good things I can find

CHORUS

V3
I feel a deep connection here
You whisper softly in my ear
Your voice just makes me melt inside
Let's find a place where we can hide

CHORUS

V4
My smile soon fades away
Old patterns come out to play
You'll never know what hit you
Can't explain why I do what I do

CHORUS

V5
You have control of my heart
And I must play this one smart
So here is my cold shoulder
Our burning love I will smolder

CHORUS
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