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Good Job! Excellent use of the assigned words.

I haven't listened to any Aimee Mann in awhile so I did a quick search and found the video for King of the Jailhouse.
Good stuff ,I can see why it influenced you.
I think I got a better idea about what you mean about the phrasing.

Don't worry about your son not listening to your advice. The older he gets the smarter you'll become.
Or so I've been told that by my kids.

Celt]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-26-train-wreck/#post-101443 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-26-train-wreck/#post-101437 Sun, 08 May 2005 01:48:44 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group guitargeek https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-26-train-wreck/#post-101437 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-26-train-wreck/#post-8907 Sat, 07 May 2005 18:17:15 +0000
So what did you expect
It's been one long train wreck
And you should have seen it coming
But you chose to look away
But now you feel so idiotic
And your moves are so robotic
Wandering around this landscape
You don't know

Chorus:
But if there's one thing I've learned
From my time in the fray
It's that love isn't supposed to make you feel that way
Together or separately the games that you play
Will catch up to you

Don't focus on the past
If you want your love to last
You know all of the reasons
That this wasn't meant to be
You can learn from these mistakes
But you'd better hit the brakes
Before you pass the point
Where you can't get back.



I've been listening to Aimee Mann's new cd all week so the phraseing is pretty influenced by that. As far as subject, my son is in what he thinks is love for the first time,with someone who is with someone else, so this is just my frustration at his not listening to my advise. I welcome any feedback!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group katreich https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-26-train-wreck/#post-8907