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nice little song. i guess that by being vague each reader gets to think back to his own personal day. but then on the other hand i kinda feel like the song is lacking for that same reason. like you the writter doesn't know what this time is that he is talking about. when i read this i would like to know who this person is that is narrating or what this day/time is that we are to think back to.
Good things did happen this line sounds a little strange in the wording. When the people were all in-linenot quite sure what this line refers too or what it means.

this song isn't bad, has a nice, light, airy feel to it.

-CheapThrill]]> Sunday Songwriters Group CheapThrill https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-45-2/#post-69958 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-45-2/#post-3874 Sun, 19 Sep 2004 07:24:11 +0000
Onto A Better Day

(Verse One)
I remember way back when,
Things were so much better,
Time and time again,
Good things happened.

(Verse Two)
Do you remember the time?
When the days were fine,
When the people were all in-line,
When was that time?

(Chorus One)
So long ago today,
I still see the faces,
Tell myself it's O.K.
Onto a better day.

(Verse Three)
Don't you see?
Just what it's like,
To be free,
From the grips of time.

(Verse Four)
In my mind,
They say I'm out,
Out of time,
I'm gonna try.

(Verse Two)
Do you remember the time?
When the days were fine,
When the people were all in-line,
When was that time?

(Chorus One)
So long ago today,
I still see the faces,
Tell myself it's O.K.
Onto a better day.

(Chorus Two)
Years have past,
life's moved on,
but in my dreams,
there's something still wrong.

(Verse Two)
Do you remember the time?
When the days were fine,
When the people were all in-line,
When was that time?

(Chorus One)
So long ago today,
I still see the faces,
Tell myself it's O.K.
Onto a better day.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group bstguitarist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-45-2/#post-3874