https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 16:10:19 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55562 Sun, 14 Sep 2003 22:54:19 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Heelsy https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55562 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55561 Tue, 09 Sep 2003 22:12:37 +0000
This is a great start. You've set up a scene where lots of things can happen. A lyric can come from multiple points of view. This should turn out as a terrific song.

Peace

]]> Sunday Songwriters Group David Hodge https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55561 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55560 Tue, 09 Sep 2003 22:03:11 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55560 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55559 Tue, 09 Sep 2003 22:02:53 +0000
I can feel the emotional content based on the imagery.

You picked a great time to start.  Last week was just the ideas.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Nick Torres https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-55559 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-1439 Tue, 09 Sep 2003 21:04:48 +0000
Yea..I know it's not too great - I'm really new at this. Also, I think this is like a 3 part SSG or something, and I wasn't here for the first week or two....oh well.

by the way, the two ideas I chose were:

9) A house of light with rooms of shadows  
 
10) ...whispering candlelight...  

TomD :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TomD https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-47-tomd/#post-1439