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The river's run dry
No more tears left to cry
The river's run dry
All that's left are lies

or
The river's run dry
No more tears left to cry
The river's run dry
Swimming in this pool of lies

The second one seems to contradict itself a bit. My mind is drawing a blank this week!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-55583 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-55582 Wed, 24 Sep 2003 00:21:42 +0000
Peace

]]> Sunday Songwriters Group David Hodge https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-55582 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-55581 Tue, 23 Sep 2003 22:11:34 +0000
Also can you stretch the river analogy to include the last line.  It seems to suddenly pop out and away from the previous 3 lines.

Can you write down as many water images as you can and add one in to that last line.

waterfall of lies

or

beneath this raft of lies

something like that
]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Nick Torres https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-55581 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-1454 Tue, 23 Sep 2003 20:58:48 +0000 No more tears left to cry
The river's run dry
I think we both know we're living a lie]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TomD https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-week-49-tomd/#post-1454