https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 13:55:07 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383620 Sat, 16 Nov 2013 04:29:41 +0000 I'm sure it isn't one of those that you'll be playing for the kids. :lol: :lol: :lol: You got that right...but married folk needy to keep the relationship spicy too! :twisted:
I know what you're saying about the forum. Thanks for the confirmation :cry:
I hope that things will pick up.
Me too! :note2:
And if that's you on mandolin, you really have the tremolo technique down (something that I haven't mastered yet). No regular steel string guitar :wink:
James,a different style for you. I'd say so. I just heard of the artist Steven Wilson I heard this song and it had some influence on the experimenting http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BClzBQmZZBc

...always looking to grow :wink:


Thanks for the listen and feedback :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383620 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383619 Sat, 16 Nov 2013 00:55:17 +0000
The music works very well with the lyrics and your singing is perfect for this song. I like the revised lyrics better than the original.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Hobson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383619 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383613 Thu, 14 Nov 2013 19:16:37 +0000
I know what you're saying about the forum. I've only been posting since I think Year 10, so haven't seen the progression. But there needs to be a critical mass of people putting up songs and commenting. I hope that things will pick up. It seems to not just be the SSG, but the entire site that has slowed down.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Hobson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383613 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383609 Wed, 13 Nov 2013 16:29:16 +0000
Thanks for the link....I hadn't heard the song.....when I heard the voice I thought.....oh that's the spirit in the sky singer....unique voice .....TRex
just how many songs have you written since you've joined the SSG? A lot but not enough :wink:
have you ever missed a week? - Here and there, mostly when summer traveling, but I think I made up for them in the FAWM challenges in Feb. :lol:
slow down, you're making the rest of us look lazy! Oh, Vic :cry: Not to put the pressure on you or anyone else, but this last year has felt like I'm standing on the shoulders of the sleeping giant of SSG :?

I did Google search and found another site this week that is doing a song-a-week. They are in week 19 of year 1.....they posted the challenge on a Monday this week and have about 6 songs posted in 3 days.....68 song replies......and 284 views........ :shock: Maybe it's the newlywed phase of the group :P

I'm just sharing this hoping more people will post more songs/drafts here to get this group a bit more active again :note1:

Thanks, Vic, for your comments and encouraging feedback...... :mrgreen:



Hey Paul,

Thanks so much for the listen and feedback. :D I really appreciate it!

-James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383609 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383606 Wed, 13 Nov 2013 09:41:07 +0000 Interesting that you went for a picking song this week which was the same place that I was heading with my song yet to learn how to play it.
There's nothing I would change, thanks for that

cheers
Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383606 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383603 Tue, 12 Nov 2013 22:15:44 +0000 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=--EcVz-KaVU .
Anyway, another good one in the bag, mate - just how many songs have you written since you've joined the SSG? One a week - have you ever missed a week? - since you joined - slow down, you're making the rest of us look lazy!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-383603 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-44792 Mon, 11 Nov 2013 13:30:44 +0000
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12567108

=====Revised Version=====

Touch me
You tease titillate
You’re my obsession
Don’t make me wait

Feed me
Wet satin on skin
Arched in a quiver
‘Til I give in

Your curls
Fingered in slow twirls
Now to confession
You’re my obsession

Tasty
Wind kissing licks
Exhale the shiver
Stuck smooth on lips

Please, please
Please stop this ache
You’re my obsession
Braided by fate

Loose curls
Fingered in slow twirls
Now to confession
You’re my obsession


=====Original Version=====

Touch me
Mix pleasure with pain
Call it obsession
Barely still sane

Feed me
Wet satin on skin
Arched in a quiver
Tense to a grin

Soft curls
Fingered in slow twirls
Once a possession
Now an obsession

Greedy
Obscenities break
Call it obsession
Can’t stop the ache

Needy
Burn, burn sweetly sick
Exhale the shiver
Should do the trick

Soft curls
Fingered in slow twirls
Once a possession
Now an obsession]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg-y12w2-obsession/#post-44792