https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 14:32:51 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382798 Sun, 23 Jun 2013 05:57:39 +0000 That's kind of like a magician saying " this is how I did that trick" and then telling the truth. I would rather think that you created these lines. :P Yes, I would not share that information if I was playing a live set to an audience....and they wouldn't even care to hear it.....but this forum is for fellow magicians and there is plenty of magic to go around :wink:

In fact, that's what I feel this forum is all about.....to learn from each other the behind the scenes tips and tricks that we can all use to be better magicians/musicians/songwriters :D

-James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382798 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382797 Sun, 23 Jun 2013 04:20:24 +0000
Thanks for the confirmation. I keep trying to be more descriptive in showing/not telling. It doesn't come easy but like you said it gets better results.
"speaking through her teeth with forced restraint" This line as well as "Rubbing my head, my legs start to shake" came from a very useful and inexpensive writer's "tool" (pdf version $4.99) called The Emotion Thesaurus at thebookshelfmuse.blogspot.com

Thanks again for the listen and feedback :D

James That's kind of like a magician saying " this is how I did that trick" and then telling the truth. I would rather think that you created these lines.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group John Sargent https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382797 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382796 Sun, 23 Jun 2013 03:14:17 +0000
Thanks for the confirmation. I keep trying to be more descriptive in showing/not telling. It doesn't come easy but like you said it gets better results.
"speaking through her teeth with forced restraint" This line as well as "Rubbing my head, my legs start to shake" came from a very useful and inexpensive writer's "tool" (pdf version $4.99) called The Emotion Thesaurus at thebookshelfmuse.blogspot.com

Thanks again for the listen and feedback :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382796 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382794 Sat, 22 Jun 2013 18:49:48 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Hobson https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382794 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382786 Sat, 22 Jun 2013 02:41:59 +0000
Thanks for the listen and feedback :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382786 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382775 Thu, 20 Jun 2013 16:17:59 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group JordanP https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382775 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382770 Wed, 19 Jun 2013 17:08:11 +0000 It reminded me of Ray Davies a little bit. I'll take that compliment :wink:

Thanks for the listen and post :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382770 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382769 Wed, 19 Jun 2013 15:31:39 +0000
Mark]]> Sunday Songwriters Group mlazare https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382769 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382767 Wed, 19 Jun 2013 13:35:44 +0000 Is that you or one of your programs playing? This time it's me. :wink: The vocals and guitar are on the same track recorded at the same time.

This was my first recording and I was still trying to learn/write the melody so I had to punch in two times.

Thanks for the listen and feedback. :D

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382767 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382765 Wed, 19 Jun 2013 04:22:05 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group John Sargent https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg11-week33-late/#post-382765