https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 16:50:27 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56189 Wed, 07 Jan 2004 07:51:12 +0000 No Last Call On Bourbon Street: Many ladies, but are you sure? Sounds like your friend would fit right in, where "Nothings like it seems in New Orleans".

G string is great.  If next week's assignment is to write a song using another's chorus, I just might tackle that one.  Wait, maybe thats not the best choice of wording here.  I'll see what I can pull off, um, maybe pull a few strings.  Aw heck, I guess I had just better shut up now.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56189 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56188 Wed, 07 Jan 2004 00:55:55 +0000 suprised at the "He" for the drag strip diva got me laughing here
One of my best friends is gay and loves drag, and I love to help him strut his stuff, so he came to mind immediately

The Great titles should take some credit though Thanks to Porr and Twicasbad you get AT LEAST HALF THE CREDIT.
Go well
Jamir ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56188 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56187 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 22:14:11 +0000 Although I would have never thought of the "he" in the diva line but hey its great....You did my title justice]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Twicasbad https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56187 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56186 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 21:21:19 +0000 Drag Strip Diva - excellent, so different from my more obvious route.

Drop the G String Baby - again this is really well done.  I'd considered this one but ran from its difficulty. I think it's the pick of the two definitely.

Good Stuff

Bob  :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56186 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56185 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 21:15:50 +0000
I think the G-string chorus has great potential, great job!

Tell me if you come up with verses :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group manontheside https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56185 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56184 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 18:54:10 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group P0RR https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56184 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56183 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 09:36:50 +0000
Both of these are very good, and I like them as is.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56183 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56182 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 03:32:21 +0000 It was already a great line, but you're lines are not bad either, they almost have a natural rhythm. I'd suggest acoustic blues to go with it.

The drag strip diva might be more difficult to sing. "a flick of the hair" might fit better if you'd change it to "flicking hair". Only a suggestion.

]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Christiaan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-56182 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10-jamir/#post-1601 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 03:05:53 +0000
I chose

1. Drag strip diva  
2. Drop the G string baby (no need to fret tonight )

ok here is the first chorus:

He's a drag strip diva without a care
and woo's the crowd with a flick of the hair
running soft hands over lucious curves
of stuck on bosoms in tight evening wear

and the second

Drop the G string baby
you're wound up much to tight
Let me help you get in tune
No need to fret tonight


Go well , and thanks to who ever for the great titles !!

Jamir ;)
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