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Dog years - hmm! - could be interesting

Bob :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-56281 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-56280 Mon, 12 Jan 2004 15:38:22 +0000
i've been here quite a lot. i used to call myself new writer. and i was thinking of changing the last line to something about dog years.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jane https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-56280 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-56279 Mon, 12 Jan 2004 13:56:50 +0000
I like Mercury Sunset simple yet striking.  Waiting in Line seems incomplete to me I 'd be tempted to make some minor changes as follows:

I'll be waiting in Line
Standing right here
I'll be watching for a sign
Even if it takes all year

Good stuff though and if you haven't been formally welcomed to SSG then welcome it's good to have you here.

Bob :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-56279 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-10/#post-1619 Sun, 11 Jan 2004 05:09:14 +0000
Waiting in Line
Standing right here
Waiting for a sign
Could take about a year

Mercury Sunset

Mercury sunset
Silvery sinking light
Mercury Sunset
Soft focus backlight

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