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-Marv]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MarvelousOptimist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-59952 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-59903 Thu, 29 Apr 2004 23:33:30 +0000
Go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-59903 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-59891 Thu, 29 Apr 2004 20:58:55 +0000 Awesome. The storyline is great, it reads well,I would not change a thing.
Blessings. Olav]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Olav https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-59891 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-26-marvelousoptimist-jamir/#post-2242 Thu, 29 Apr 2004 10:01:10 +0000

The view is... so beautiful.
From the bottom of this puddle
I never even noticed I'd been crying
Time, go backwards, I left myself behind
as your memory rippled forward
in the shadows of my mind

And your voice is so musical
from deep inside this tunnel,
I swear I never noticed you were lying
Time, go backwards, I believed every line
of the whispered conversations
in the shadows of my mind

Thanks,
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