https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-30-mjbird/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 19:40:20 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-30-mjbird/#post-61481 Mon, 31 May 2004 09:11:15 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group bstguitarist https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-30-mjbird/#post-61481 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-30-mjbird/#post-2524 Sun, 30 May 2004 09:31:55 +0000 then I took a last look tonight. I got into it by sorting the phrases by syllable count. This got me started (the hardest part) which led me into the challenge of getting these seemingly disparate phrases to feel right together.

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The melodies are new to me
They strike a chord within
Turning thought to colors
Mixing in the din

Audiovisual madness
A rhythmic feast to see
Blending on this canvas
Perched in front of me

Let's see what happens
When the beat inside of me
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
visions breaking free

Make the words matter
As the rhythm comforts me
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
Brush and brain agree

Grace Under Pressure
Revealed so beautifully
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
Sounds that we can see.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week-30-mjbird/#post-2524