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Good work
Laura]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BlackSwan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56221 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56220 Thu, 08 Jan 2004 14:54:24 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group TwistedFingers https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56220 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56219 Thu, 08 Jan 2004 09:03:29 +0000 if we put it back in the blender....
This does more for me:

Drinkin' in the dark alone.
Not much left since you've been gone.
Just this guitar and a cigarette
chased with a sip from this cup of death.



Your idea was really good...just needs a better beat
in my opinion.

]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56219 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56218 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 17:14:24 +0000
Grab my guitar and a cigarette
Then have another sip from this cup of death.

I'd suggest

Suck on a bottle and a cigarette
Another hit from this cup of death.

Second one was fine.

Good stuff

Bob  ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56218 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56217 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 16:06:54 +0000 First one didn't do much for me.  I would organize it
a bit more.


Thanks. But, could you be a bit more specific here? Yes, it is Janis Joplin.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TwistedFingers https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56217 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56216 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 09:39:55 +0000 a bit more.

Second one was very good.

BTW...is your pic Janis Joplin?]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-56216 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-1608 Tue, 06 Jan 2004 03:38:23 +0000
Drinkin' in the dark all alone.
Nothing left of me
since you've been gone.
Grab my guitar and a cigarette
Then have another sip from this cup of death.
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I'll Show You

You've run me up
And down the other side.
But, I‘ll show you.
I have my pride.
I'll show you
What I'm made of inside.
I'll show you.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group TwistedFingers https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week10-twisted-fingers/#post-1608