https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 19:20:32 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56020 Tue, 02 Dec 2003 21:55:01 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56020 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56019 Tue, 02 Dec 2003 21:48:46 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Nick Torres https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56019 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56018 Tue, 02 Dec 2003 20:30:55 +0000
Well, maybe the last one would have rhyming problems...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group maxwell https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56018 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56017 Tue, 02 Dec 2003 16:49:17 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Nick Torres https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56017 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56016 Tue, 02 Dec 2003 14:41:44 +0000 Hi Maxwell,

Very good stuff.

The only line that struck me as odd was:

oh so tempting

I don't know why.

Nick
He said she was beautiful, but that changed after she drew him in. Like one of those girl demon people that sing to put men under a spell... I got it, i think...]]> Sunday Songwriters Group PsYcHoNIK https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56016 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56015 Mon, 01 Dec 2003 22:31:01 +0000
Very good stuff.

The only line that struck me as odd was:

oh so tempting

I don't know why.

Nick]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Nick Torres https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56015 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56014 Wed, 26 Nov 2003 08:29:19 +0000 Did you make a deal at the crossroads for your talent?  ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56014 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56013 Wed, 26 Nov 2003 00:57:01 +0000 Olav]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Olav https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56013 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56012 Wed, 26 Nov 2003 00:28:30 +0000 This is enough to give me nightmares !!!

The imagry is excellent, i got shivers up my spine reading it, but, I am not sure I would want to actually hear it sung, unless it was on a ghost tour  :'(
May my little people protect you.

Go well
Jamir ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-56012 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week3-maxwell/#post-1542 Tue, 25 Nov 2003 23:46:18 +0000
The words of the week: Evil darkness shadow death agony scream chains horror teeth fear escape fire hell stench

The Evil Thing

She came into my room aglow
With me her one desire
How was I to know the flame
I felt was real hell fire

She took my hand and pulled me down
Her kiss was oh so temptinglong and burning
How was I to know the kiss
Could damn me everlasting

Chorus:
(group chanting, with echo effect)
Evil Thing, Evil Thing hear our darkness calling
Enter now our circle round
Enter now this bloodied ground
Take shape to do our bidding
Hair of gold and bright blue eyes
Stealth, deception, darkest lies
Beauty, passion, turned to cries...

Caressing me with gentle touch
Her fingers left me bleeding
Screaming chained in agony
No one could hear my pleading

Tender skin turned leather as
Soft hair became as wire
No shadow of her beauty now
As she dragged me to the fire

Chorus:
(group chanting, with echo effect)
Evil Thing, Evil Thing hear our darkness calling
Enter now our circle round
Enter now this bloodied ground
Take shape to do our bidding
Hair of gold and bright blue eyes
Stealth, deception, darkest lies
Beauty, passion, turned to cries...

It took the form of loveliness
Giving all I ever dreamed of
Then smiling teeth came gnashing in
Nightmare disguised as true love

Bridge (group chanting, with echo effect):
Red leather skin, pointed tail
Horns and claws and shadow
It's the Evil Thing
It's the Evil Thing
It's the Evil Thing

Running scared and screaming loud
I tried to reach the daylight
Praying for the dream to end
For morning to end all my fright

I felt hot breath upon my back
Turned to see the ghastly sight
Just as it's jaws spread open wide
I was saved by sunlight (sudden, unreconciled end)
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