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]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MJBird https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-56130 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-56129 Sun, 28 Dec 2003 16:48:10 +0000
Burnt by fire, keeping above water, fighting to breathe? Seems like you're sinking! Maybe a good title?

I think the chorus could do with some revising. It just isn't special enough.

But I love verse three. "they say there's plenty to go around, and yet I suffocate"
Spinechilling!

- Chris.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Christiaan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-56129 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-56128 Mon, 22 Dec 2003 14:00:18 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group PsYcHoNIK https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-56128 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-1579 Mon, 22 Dec 2003 09:00:38 +0000
Verse 1
All my life I've been burnt by fire
Never learning how to live
Trying hard to be someone I'm not
No one caring who I am
just a soul that life forgot

Chorus:
Life is just a game
That I can never win
When it seems that I'm ahead
I'm losing once again

Verse 2
I try to keep above the water
All i ever do is sink
and it feels as though I will drown
I try to get to the top
But all I do is fall further down

Bridge:
No matter how hard I try
Fate just pushes me aside
There are times I have cried
Only wishing I could die

Verse 3
My body fighting to breathe the air
But there's not enough for me
They say there's plenty to go around
And yet here I suffocate
As the rope of life has left me bound

Chorus:
Life is just a game
That I can never win
When it seems that I'm ahead
I'm losing once again

Verse 4
As I'm buried six feet in the earth
I realized all I've missed
I scream out, but there's no sound
Only silence to be heard
Now I'm trapped beneath the ground

Bridge:
No matter how hard I've tried
Fate has just pushed me aside
There were times I have cried
Now i wish i were alive]]> Sunday Songwriters Group 2Kewl https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg2-week8-2kewl/#post-1579