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and to wish one and all a great, happy and musical festive season. We leave again for the Middle East on Christmas night so will be out of touch for a while, but will pop in from time to time as I can until my computer and stuff is set up that end.
Go well

Ja'mir :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-80549 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79744 Tue, 14 Dec 2004 13:06:44 +0000
A :-)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Alan Green https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79744 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79535 Mon, 13 Dec 2004 10:10:20 +0000
Just wanted to say that the music you put to this is wonderful. The rhythm fits the setting of the song beautifully, and the melody is quiet and haunting. I can see how this topic would evoke rage, anger, or indignation. But your approach is considerably more powerful, and consequently, (I think) more effective. Ironic, that such an abominable act could provide the genesis for such a beautiful work. And I actually do think that your piece is as beautiful as the event is despicable.

Really well done.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group scratchmonkey https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79535 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79520 Mon, 13 Dec 2004 07:46:50 +0000
Great song, though 8)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BlackSwan https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/paged/2/#post-79520 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79516 Mon, 13 Dec 2004 06:39:43 +0000
There are certain elements lyrics have, certain elements that each person appeals to, and I think you have done a very good job at pulling such a 'shadowed' subject out in the middle of the room.

Your song will definitely stir emotion, good job!]]> Sunday Songwriters Group xposed https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79516 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79455 Sun, 12 Dec 2004 16:34:24 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Val https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79455 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79454 Sun, 12 Dec 2004 16:16:28 +0000
congratulations, Ja'mir! it sounds really great and tender but also kinda emphatic. and now I don't have any problems with the third verse line thing I mentioned, you got it well.

got to say my favourite part of the song is how you sing the first line of the chorus, especially the way you sing 'defiled'.
beautiful..... :cry:

keep it up.
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79454 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79416 Sun, 12 Dec 2004 04:34:10 +0000
i think you did a great job here. did read the lyrics till i heard the mp3 and read along with you singing. i think your folk style fits the subject and sentiment of this song great. you manage to have such tenderness and compassion in your lyrics and voice. it is certainly a touchy subject that if it wasn't done just right would be horrible, but you managed to pull it off. i think you balanced theright mix of sentiment and outrage for this act, that also something that really works here. your song isn't just a pissed off angry song but at the same time it is just a lets just sit here and cry song either.

great, great job.

-CheapThrill]]> Sunday Songwriters Group CheapThrill https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79416 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79411 Sun, 12 Dec 2004 02:45:55 +0000
first of all what a amazing voice , and I like your changes in the chorus
it's easier to change it when your sining it rather than writting it I suppose

but this is very haunting and very very well done I have listened to this a few times now and get blown away every time .

well done

well done

cheers]]> Sunday Songwriters Group lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79411 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79404 Sun, 12 Dec 2004 02:03:14 +0000
Comments and crits welcome

Go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5-jamir-now-with-mp3/#post-79404