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I liked the song. Sort of Dylanish and I'm a big fan of Dylan! I especially liked

war child
bombs will hunt you and bodies will smile
you'll cry for your friends and your bosses will smile
war child

I also wanted to get your work to the top of the forum since it was way down on the bottom is this weeks assignment and hardly anyone has looked at it. Good work.

MikeM]]> Sunday Songwriters Group MikeM https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5/#post-79370 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5/#post-78463 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 12:04:46 +0000 I love this part
we will climb into the cradle of peace
when the masters and their fire cease
but now, bye child
bye child

awesome ending
well done
:D :D :D :D :D :D]]> Sunday Songwriters Group lotto king https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5/#post-78463 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5/#post-5362 Mon, 06 Dec 2004 11:07:35 +0000 so this i guess will only be called Child
maybe that's more fitting.
you can probably guess what sort of headline this came from. the metre is definitely off, since i just wrote this without fitting it to music, but i think the general idea is there.


when you flew out over the ocean
you thought you were safe
i barely knew you brother
i only saw your face

your pack is only part of your burden
the weight of our hope the rest
we toss you to the high seas to sink
we forgot that your shoes were leaden

war child
bombs will hunt you and bodies will smile
you'll cry for your friends and your bosses will smile
war child

drown in the sand dry in the water
lift up your head and just stare
just stare just stare just stare
into the eye of fire and murder

one day it will blink
and you will be born a child
for war children are not of this earth
war children are only for death

war child
bombs will hunt you and bodies will smile
you'll cry for your friends and your bosses will smile
war child

we will climb into the cradle of peace
when the masters and their fire cease
but now, bye child
bye child

thanks for reading,
Patrick]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jpsuperstar https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3-week-5/#post-5362