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Very good song. A wonderful bit of storytelling.

Everything about this song just works well - I realy like it.

Great stuff

Bob :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76689 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76301 Wed, 17 Nov 2004 21:36:19 +0000
Well I really like this one... there was only one line that sounded ,I don't know what, but out of place,

Designed to save memories

Other than that I really liked it, very good imagery
Go well
Ja'mir]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamir https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76301 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76259 Wed, 17 Nov 2004 15:16:48 +0000 Reads well, nice flow, good lyrics and mental images...I can visualise the photograph....

:) :) :)

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76259 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76257 Wed, 17 Nov 2004 13:46:25 +0000
v1
Every photo I've ever taken,
That has a person inside,
Has bred nothing but regret in the recesses of my mind.

v2
So now I no longer take photos,
Designed to save memories.
It just doesn't seem worth the trouble when every click becomes a disease.

Br1
But here I find myself looking at you in a photo that looks deep into me.
And here I find, when I look at you,
That regrets are replaced with dreams.

Ch1
It's nothing complicated,
Just an early morning scene.
A park bench and a soul,
Tied for eternity.

v3
Every photo I've ever taken's nothing more than a snapshot in time.
Never have a thing to say, never help me to see where I'm blind.

v4
And yet this photo I'm holding's a microcosm of the course of my life.
It tells of all I have done, all I'm doing and all that I might.

Br1
So here I find myself looking at you with a smile that says thousands of words.
And here I find when I look at you
That all is alright with the world.

Ch2/Outro
It's nothing complicated,
Just framing our favourite place.
A park bench and two souls,
One eternal embrace.



As far as the rhythm of the words go, you have to cram some stuff in. It works fine with the music I have for the verses (don't really have anything I like for the rest yet)! If you can be bothered, read it a couple of times and it should hopefully slot into place.

dog - I guess 'One Eternal Embrace' could work - it's just I feel like that is slightly giving the point of the song away, from the beginning. Maybe that doesn't matter, but it shall certainly be known as that unless I think of something better (unlikely).

Cheers all,
G]]> Sunday Songwriters Group gjbrake https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76257 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76247 Wed, 17 Nov 2004 10:52:36 +0000
-- Scratch 8)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group scratchmonkey https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76247 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76172 Tue, 16 Nov 2004 22:07:30 +0000
Don't know about anyone else, but I like to know about verse/chorus/bridge etc.....

Having a really hard time fitting any kind of rhythm to this....

But nice lyrics all the same....

Vic

:) :) :)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76172 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76160 Tue, 16 Nov 2004 21:00:46 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group smokindog https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76160 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76158 Tue, 16 Nov 2004 20:51:54 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group smokindog https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-76158 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-4966 Tue, 16 Nov 2004 19:36:09 +0000
Every photo I've ever taken,
That has a person inside,
Has bred nothing but regret
In the recesses of my mind.

So now I no longer take photos,
Designed to save memories.
It just doesn't seem worth the trouble,
When every click becomes a disease.


But here I find myself looking at you,
In a photo that looks deep into me.
And here I find, when I look at you,
That regrets are replaced with dreams.

It's nothing complicated,
Just an early morning scene.
A park bench and a soul,
Tied for eternity.



Every photo I've ever taken's
Nothing more than a snapshot in time.
Never have a thing to say,
Never help me to see where I'm blind.

And yet this photo I'm holding's
A microcosm of the course of my life.
It tells of all I have done,
All I'm doing and all that I might.

So here I find myself looking at you,
With a smile that says thousands of words.
And here I find when I look at you,
That all is alright with the world.


It's nothing complicated,
Just framing our favourite place.
A park bench and two souls,
One eternal embrace.




Dissapointingly I missed Week 1, but I've got his week's in early (ish). Any comments of any kind more than welcome.

Cheers, G]]> Sunday Songwriters Group gjbrake https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg3w2/#post-4966