SSG4w21 Cry Out to God - Sunday Songwriters Group

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

Bob — Sun, 02 Apr 2006 18:27:44 +0000

Hi Geoo

Not so much Christian as Country to me - works really well.

Good stuff

Bob

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

Celt — Fri, 31 Mar 2006 13:50:33 +0000

Geoo,

Great Song. It doesn't need a thing (not even chords)

I love the sound of your voice acapella.

I agree with Joe with popularity of Contemporary Christian
music now this could be big.

John

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

geoo — Fri, 31 Mar 2006 13:22:25 +0000

Thanks everyone for the comments. I enjoyed this lesson, hope next week is as easy.

Geoo

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

Joe — Fri, 31 Mar 2006 04:13:12 +0000

Not exactly my thing either, but I still think it's good, and Christian Rock is pretty popular right now, so this could be big. Pretty nice vocals, too.

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

BarnaBus RoX — Fri, 31 Mar 2006 03:50:12 +0000

hi Geoo

Well your song ... not my sort of thing personally but hey who cares about that .......

"For a world that is quickly dying
Cry out to God "

That really does stand out for me

All in all the flow seems quite good and there is a story to it which I always enjoy ...

Good effort mate

Keep em coming

Hilch

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

pbee — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 22:33:48 +0000

Hi Geoo,
I am not sure I am quite finished. I dont think I would change anything here, it looks and sounds pretty tight to me, well done. It's a good song and not only that, you sang it well too.

cheers

Paul

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

Joe — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 19:19:02 +0000

Nice lyrics, Geo.

Joe

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

Anonymous — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 09:11:10 +0000

Nice song, Geoo. I like the persuasive element in it. How it actually tells the audience to pray. I think it makes the song more powerful.

RE: SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

BarnaBus RoX — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 08:45:45 +0000

Geoo

I will be back to reply to your song very tired at the moment .

hilch :?:

SSG4w21 Cry Out to God

geoo — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 02:42:13 +0000

I am not sure I am quite finished. I feel like I either need a bridge at the end and then go back into the chorus or simply do a little instrumental thing and then go back into the chorus. I dont think its my best song but I really like it. I have been trying to write in this genre for a while now and this time it didnt even feel to forced.

I made a little soundclipacapelo just so you could get the idea. I think the guitar chords would be something like C, F, G... sumthin sumthin. LOL.. Enjoy

Geoo


Cry Out to God

I believe in a time
When right conquered all wrong
In a time When a man's house
felt more like a home

I remember the times when I
felt good inside
When I worshipped a Christ
On a cross where He died

And I believe
Its time

To get back on our knees
Get back on our knees
Cry out to God
Cry out to God



For a world that is quickly dying
Cry out to God

I believe in a time
when kids played in the park
Every mother would watch them
Til late in the dark

And the fathers would push
as they sat in the swing
Creating their role models
Hopes, and the their dreams

And I believe
Its time

To get back on our knees
Get back on our knees
Cry out to God
Cry out to God



For a world that is quickly dying
Cry out to God