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excellent piece of writing, I like the way the song transitions from the general to the particular and then again from the general to the personal at the end of each group.
Great mp3 too.

Cheers
Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240432 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240374 Sun, 29 Apr 2007 14:12:11 +0000
Read it - liked it

Heard it - liked it more

Really good piece of writing and a really good interpretation of the assignment.

Great stuff

Bob :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240374 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240324 Sun, 29 Apr 2007 04:57:03 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Kevin72790 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240324 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240295 Sun, 29 Apr 2007 01:11:21 +0000
But a nice surprise


Well done

Trev]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240295 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240194 Sat, 28 Apr 2007 02:14:16 +0000
I particularly liked your phrasing on the mp3, especially this section.....

"And as the stare comes back
From the far side
Of that cold piece of glass
It lights the ugly things
The hopeful things
The should have beens"

and a similar section later - that's TIGHT meter!!!

I really enjoyed this one.....going to have another listen. On second thoughts, I think I'll download it. Gets a big thumbs-up from me!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-240194 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg5-week-25-every-eye/#post-25371 Fri, 27 Apr 2007 16:53:02 +0000
I tried a few things here, had some fun. Sorry about the start of the bridge, I just couldn't find my note while recording.

On SoundClick: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=337003&songID=5281744

Every Eye
©2007 Robert Gowland

Every eye in this room
Is looking at me
I put the count at two
Eyes looking at me

And as the stare comes back
From the far side
Of that cold piece of glass
It lights the ugly things
The hopeful things
The should have beens

What do you want me to be?
What you get is what you see


Every eye in this room
Is looking at me
Like a self conscious chimp in your zoo
And you're looking at me

In this false habitat
You stay behind
Your one-way piece of glass
You see in me your dreams
Your failings, fears
Your own dark things

What do you want me to be?
What you get is what you see


We'll never see everything
Unless we're willing to be seen
We won't be willing to be seen
Unless we're willing to live unsafely
So step inside the cage with me
I'll pull the bars back
So you can step inside with me


Every eye in this room
Is looking at you
Everyone in this room
Is waiting for you


What do you want me to be?
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