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cheers

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-358415 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-358403 Wed, 25 Aug 2010 23:02:08 +0000
as Peter said: This has inspired me to try a bit harder and record more of mine :D your song sounds so effortlessly beautiful.. like a real song.. where can i buy the cd? :D unlike my bits'n'pieces :lol:

thanks for sharing!
cheers,
straycat.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-358403 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357343 Fri, 30 Jul 2010 03:07:12 +0000
:D :D :D :D

(Worth an extra smiley instead of the usual three!)

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357343 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357315 Thu, 29 Jul 2010 12:38:06 +0000
Lovely singing and playing mate , was a great delight to hear your work ...

Keep recording mate , your damn good at this music capper

Take care
Trev.... :note2:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357315 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357314 Thu, 29 Jul 2010 11:48:16 +0000
Good start on the MP3. It moves along fine and you have a nice comfortable confident delivery vocally and guitar-wise. :D

The rest is really more personal opinion more so than anything needs to be changed, so to take or disregard as you see fit.
Maybe this one is just not my cup of tea, but it doesn't really grab my attention :? ....maybe a bit more contrast between the two sections?....maybe 4 chords in the verse instead of 2 (Dm A# ).....maybe this one would just have to grow on me....I don't know....How do you feel about it? What is your expectation of what the listerner should get out of the song?

BTW
Kudos for getting something down on paper and recorded :mrgreen: It's a lot more than what I have to show for this week.

Thanks for sharing.

James]]> Sunday Songwriters Group jamestoffee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357314 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357312 Thu, 29 Jul 2010 10:05:32 +0000 http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9459498

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357312 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357266 Wed, 28 Jul 2010 04:47:53 +0000 "would have no clue as to what you are talking about" fair comment. It is quite general, certainly the 1st verse is, it could just as easlily be a relationship break up. I think the second verse, has a more positive spin to it though, its more "go for it, dont let me hold you back" which again you could apply to many crossroad situations in life.
"Interesting take on the topic." LOL more interesting than you realise. I find myself in our subject shoes (so to speak) at the moment. Not so much a career change more of a career opportunity that involves a whole lot of unknowns and I have to decide whether to leave my comfort zone (take off my hushpuppies and go barefoot) or not.
"Do you have any music for this" yes I do "minimalist backing with a few minor chords" :lol: (1 actually). The verses are Dm and A# and the chorus's are F C A# C F C A# F (read guitar tuned down 2 steps and Em C G D C etc.). I do plan to record this on Thursday night as it sounds quite promising sitting on the couch with guitar in hand.


Hey Trev hows the back ? nice to see on SSG again, the break seems to have done your songwriting a power of good.

cheers

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357266 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357260 Wed, 28 Jul 2010 03:49:39 +0000
Repetitive, but interestingly so - insistent, rather than cliched.

I like it!

Always nice to see you dropping in, Paul - we need more from you!

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357260 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357259 Wed, 28 Jul 2010 03:08:11 +0000
Great take on the topic , really enjoyed reading this ...
James's little tweek has some merit , although I am not 100 % convinced , everything in the song talks about life and no real mention of a lie , its' more like , Don't judge me unless you have walked a mile in my shoes , I am sure you ( Paul ) have heard that expression before :) ...

Once again a pleasure to read your work
Take care
Trev... :note2:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357259 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357253 Wed, 28 Jul 2010 02:32:21 +0000
Wow, I like it when an assignment prompts really different responses form everyone, and this week is certainly doing that! Do you have any music for this, or plans to record a demo of it? I recall your style as being quite sparse, with nicely drifting melodies (instead of heavy rhythms, I mean it in a good way! more contemplative than hard pop), so I sometimes have trouble hearing your lyrics as you intend them until I check the /mp3s you post. I'll hold back on commenting more for now because of that, but I'm looking forward to hearing this one. Nice job.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Scrybe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/ssg8-week39-step-outside-now-with-mp3/#post-357253