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Wow I know have 6 chords now ....

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

And my quick learning skills have picked up Em wow thats 7 :lol:

Kiss Me .... well wasn't that a lovely song , one of my best in your opinion ..

By far my best song , but words are just words with out a voice Ellen and you have a voice of an angel when it comes to that song ..

Even my Ol girl is singing it now :oops: :oops:
and I thought I couldn't sing :oops: :oops:

Trev

8) :?]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/paged/2/#post-252072 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/paged/2/#post-251850 Tue, 03 Jul 2007 14:51:44 +0000
Hilch did indeed write 'Kiss Me'....once of his best, in my opinion!

Elle]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Ellenback https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/paged/2/#post-251850 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/paged/2/#post-251787 Tue, 03 Jul 2007 02:55:52 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/paged/2/#post-251787 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251784 Tue, 03 Jul 2007 02:52:24 +0000
I know what you mean about hearing something in your head a lot better than you can produce it, but I think you did fine--we can imagine the rest along with you. Very nice voice, too. Many of us can only imagine ourselves sounding that good. Well done. Looking forward to hearing more.]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Joe https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251784 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251560 Sun, 01 Jul 2007 20:04:39 +0000
Elle]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Ellenback https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251560 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251505 Sun, 01 Jul 2007 15:53:52 +0000
I love this the MP3 is raw and exciting and I love the rhythm you've got going on it's fantastic. You can cheat all you want on those chords they sound great.

Great stuff

Bob :wink:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251505 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251217 Sat, 30 Jun 2007 07:17:05 +0000
Don't worry about it. Honestly. Leave it as is. I was joking :lol: :lol: :lol:

Don't change it to "is" - it will be too much.

Doug]]> Sunday Songwriters Group DougJoy https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251217 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251167 Sat, 30 Jun 2007 02:11:22 +0000
I tried for 3 days to make that one work, and gave up in frustration, and I even tried to place it elsewhere in the song so it would not have to rhyme, but that didn't work either! I came close to using either "quiz" or "biz"...ack!!!

So, yes, I ahem cheated...LOL but I DID use the full line, and in my newest version I will ensure I make it, "it is", with true on the next line...LOL

Elle]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Ellenback https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251167 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251153 Sat, 30 Jun 2007 00:01:43 +0000
Elle LOL - sorry, I should have been more specific. Nothing at all wrong with that line - it is my favorite in the song.

I meant that the assignment called for us to use the line

"And if you tell yourself it's easy, you may even find it is"
But you wrote
"And if you tell yourself it's easy, you might even find it's true"

But we aren't here to police creativity - you got the essense of the line, and that's the most important thing, and you built a beautiful song around it. Really just trying to find something to nitpick and trying to be funny, and failing, as usual :)

Doug]]> Sunday Songwriters Group DougJoy https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251153 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251147 Fri, 29 Jun 2007 23:37:51 +0000
However, how do you mean that I cheated by not using, "A word would be wise but don't tell lies"...? I don't comprehend what you mean by "not using the line exactly as it was presented." I think I missed something, and it's important if I did, so thank you for pointing it out to me...if you could just clarify?

Elle]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Ellenback https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/tan-and-grey-week-34/#post-251147