https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 05:14:12 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229219 Sat, 17 Feb 2007 05:15:55 +0000
Teleplayer even suggested playing with a slide on my toe......

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229219 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229213 Sat, 17 Feb 2007 04:19:24 +0000
Country flavour ..Yes I can see that I have been listening alot Kirsty McColls " Days " for some reason ..

Its' a very lovely song and maybe that sort of theme has followed me as I wrote this ...

John Fogerty ...WOW big compliment and gracefully accepted thank you ..

The verse you mentioned was were I was stuck for ages and I guess that shows .. Thanks for offering of a re-write ...

I haven't even picked my guitar up since getting this second plaster on ..

as always, just MY opinion - but for what it's worth, you're getting better.....hope the same goes for the hand.....

Thank you ...I think it is getting better as I don't have to have so many beers when I come home now from work ... :lol:

Ever tried to put a belt on your pants with one hand ?

Little things I am finding almost impossible ...

But my lad knows how to open a beer for his old man as the new plaster I can't even hold a can ...grrr]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229213 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229200 Sat, 17 Feb 2007 03:01:19 +0000
I think you achieved that.....I thought it was going to be a lovey-dovey Valentine's song at first, you dragged me in then hit me with a sucker punch - really like the way you turned it all around!

Also reminds me of John Fogerty's "Honey Do" off the "Deja Vu All Over Again" album in style - and hey, being compared with JF has got to be a good thing!!!

The one verse I thought was a little clumsy was this one....

"Thats' not alright lady
Don't ever call me baby
Nothing on this Earth
Can make me fell like dirt"

maybe....

"It's far from alright, lady,
I don't want to be your baby,
You just turned my happiness,
To a broken-hearted mess"

(I got kind of a country feeling from the song.....)

as always, just MY opinion - but for what it's worth, you're getting better.....hope the same goes for the hand.....

(last year, after my second accident, the doctor wanted to replace my plaster with a lighter one after a month - when I went back to the hospital, I refused a second plaster - I was DESPERATE to play guitar again.....figured until I got my fingers moving properly, at least without a plaster I could play with a slide..... with hindsight, maybe I was stupid, but then again I was right for once in my life - physiotherapy (playing chords!) got me using the hand a lot quicker than the doctor said I would.....I was playing again after two months, he said it'd take six.....there is nothing stronger than the human spirit, especially when combined with the determination to prove someone wrong....and a bit of sheer bloody-minded pig-headedness can be a good thing too!!!! )

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-229200 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228914 Thu, 15 Feb 2007 10:11:18 +0000
Thats what I was aiming for ...

Meat loafs Dashboard lights ...1st verse he is all over this gorl and the second verse he praying for the end of time ...


I wanted to try and do my own little take on that style ...


Trevor

Ps

Paul ,

I'm sure you will be great mate ..]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228914 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228879 Thu, 15 Feb 2007 03:15:00 +0000
I think the first half is good, I just feel that you ran out of steam in second half (game of two halves mate). I do like the positive / negative structure of the halves, stick with it, you could do something with this.


Ps I'm just quietly freaking out at the moment and not writing cos I've got a live performance to do next week, I sometimes wonder why I keep putting myself through this.

Cheers
Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228879 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228853 Thu, 15 Feb 2007 00:08:14 +0000

And welcome to SSG ..I have not seen you around before



Trevor]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228853 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228809 Wed, 14 Feb 2007 16:56:24 +0000 I'll screw that list for you

I love this line. The mood of the whole song really interests me due to late events in my relationship. so ye, I can see where you're going. sorry to hear about your hand too. it'll pass soon.

good work ;)]]> Sunday Songwriters Group manti https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-228809 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-23970 Wed, 14 Feb 2007 12:37:49 +0000
Its been a while since I posted in here as my frustration grows not being able to play ...

I went to the Doc and he was very annoyed when he found out I was trying to form chords on the guitar ...!!@#@$ went and put another plaster on my hand !@#$$#$%%....


This isn't my best work I know but it does show a little of my mood recently ...

" Typical "



I can remember when Iasked you to be mine
I can recall when I asked to be my valentine
You replied with " that sounds alright baby
That sounds alright to me "I'l be your lady


You asked me if I loved you
Naturally I said I dooooo
Your the only girl for me
My darling can't you seee


You say Thats' alright baby
Yeah that's alright by you.....
I'll be your loveing lady
Anything just for you .....


Then you went and showed me
The list of a hundred things to do
All these things must be done
To show my love for you......


Thats' not alright baby
No thats not alright my lady
I'll screw that list for you..

Thats' not alright lady
Don't ever call me baby
Nothing on this Earth
Can make me fell like dirt


Thats' not alright baby
No thats not alright my lady
I'll screw that list for you


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Feed back always welcome

Trevor :!:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/typical-week-15/#post-23970