https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/ Guitar Noise Discussion Board en-US Thu, 04 Jun 2026 14:46:42 +0000 wpForo 60 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-138179 Fri, 11 Nov 2005 06:37:39 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group beans7178 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-138179 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-138169 Fri, 11 Nov 2005 06:07:36 +0000
You are on fire this week.

I only have one question.

Are you working out your unresolved anger issues?

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-138169 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-137976 Thu, 10 Nov 2005 17:28:43 +0000 guess what I was really relieved and happy to know who Machiavelli is.(had to write a course test in history today)

there are so many great lines in here... quoting becomes a joke
I'm very fond of the second, fourth, sixth and seventh part... the others are good too, but these stick out for me;)

really, I second hilch's comment, please record this! :D
I'm glad I got that off my chest once and for all...... feel better now, aye? yes I know that, I have written songs about people who disappointed/hurt me, too but mine usually tend to go more in the "god, how I hate you" direction so I'm pleased to see yours is on a different(higher) level:)

thanks for posting.
cheers,
bluenightangel]]> Sunday Songwriters Group straycat. https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-137976 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-137919 Thu, 10 Nov 2005 12:10:24 +0000
I don't know if I should be replying to anyones songs as I can't finish a song I started about 3 months ago ..

But since I have been a long time fan of your music I thought I would drop a line and say please , please can you record it for a hack like me ......????

I just love listening to your songs reading them just does not do them justice and I can 't play well enough yet to play you chords that you posted in previous posts ..

Oh well now you know you have a 42 year old fan who is struggling to write songs and is S L O W L Y improving with the guitar ...

All the best keep up the great writting

hilch]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-137919 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-12996 Thu, 10 Nov 2005 06:56:44 +0000
Anyway, this is just a natural progression from part IV, sort of a paean to the ex-girlfriend....

Two-Faced

You said you were my friend, and I believed you,
Now you're telling lies behind my back,
Spreading malicious rumours about me,
All of them fantasies, none of them facts,

But the people you tell will say,
"There's no smoke without fire,"
I try to tell the truth,
And I'm branded a liar....

You're so spiteful, vicious and twisted,
You put Machiavelli to shame,
You're trying to destroy my reputation,
Trying to destroy my good name,

And the lies you tell will linger,
And the mud you throw will stick,
You won't confront me face-to-face,
You're a hypocrite - you're sick!

Before you critcise my lifestyle, take a good long look at your own,
If you want to tell stories, start a little closer to home,
The lies you tell will haunt you, when they bounce back in your face,
When the truth comes down on my side, to put you in your place.....

You should know your place, you're a total disgrace,
To the human race, You're so two-faced........
You should know your place, you're a total disgrace,
To the human race, You're so two-faced........

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I'm glad I got that off my chest once and for all......

:D :D :D

Vic]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Vic Lewis VL https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-1-pt5/#post-12996