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Looking forward to reading how it turns out.

Peace

]]> Sunday Songwriters Group David Hodge https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-15-part-one/#post-56634 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-15-part-one/#post-56633 Mon, 09 Feb 2004 21:01:04 +0000
Good start

Bob :)
]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Bob https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-15-part-one/#post-56633 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-15-part-one/#post-1708 Mon, 09 Feb 2004 20:41:47 +0000
Part One-- My song is going to be about one friend that I have that I love dearly and have a blast with but that is constantly hurting me and breaking my heart and is just completely not going anywhere in life, which isn't very inspiring. Breaking away from her is hard because it's almost like an addiction but I know it will be better for me to be on my own. I'm going to write it like I'm talking straight to the friend.

So..here's how it's gonna go, I think....

Verse 1--explaining the friend and the fun we have

Verse 2--how she brings me down and hurts me

Chorus--how I can "fly above her" and be better without her

Verse 3--had a chance to be a good friend but blew it

Verse 4--now I will be independent

Back to Chorus

End--moving on without you

Any suggestions would be helpful...I dunno if I like where it's going but we'll see....]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-15-part-one/#post-1708