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Good stuff!

One small suggestion

How about in the first chorus instead of

"I'm removing you"

Trying

"I'll remove myself of you"

Seems to fit better with the other two

Just a thought

John]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Celt https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161963 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161602 Thu, 23 Feb 2006 22:58:16 +0000 Sunday Songwriters Group martin-6 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161602 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161573 Thu, 23 Feb 2006 20:15:18 +0000
good work here :D

cheers

Paul]]> Sunday Songwriters Group pbee https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161573 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161519 Thu, 23 Feb 2006 13:19:42 +0000
I think this would be a really good loud rock song , plenty of guitar riffs etc

Would like to see the chorus a little more like two lines repeated like

" I'm removing you
I'm removing you "

No more lies from you
No more lies from you

Just a suggestion ( don't be offended by my thoughts though )

Ilove the beginning of this First line really sets the mood for the entire song .

Well done Angel

hilch :?:]]> Sunday Songwriters Group BarnaBus RoX https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161519 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161511 Thu, 23 Feb 2006 10:44:49 +0000
Never go back to the way it used to be
Being everyone else but me
Now that I'm finally rid of you
I can see the world anew

like doing in those leeches to, very nice

m]]> Sunday Songwriters Group sytys https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-161511 https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-15746 Thu, 23 Feb 2006 08:01:53 +0000
Suck me in
Get me addicted
Caught in a web
Of your in securities

I'm removing you
I'm removing you
I'm removing you
I'm removing you

Ridding myself of the parasite
Putting salt on the leech
Having better things to do
Gonna live my life anew

Free of the bullshit
No more of the nonsense
Out of your low
Self esteem trap

I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you

Rid myself of the parasite
Put salt on the leech
Having better things to do
Living my life anew

I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you

Never go back to the way it used to be
Being everyone else but me
Now that I'm finally rid of you
I can see the world anew]]> Sunday Songwriters Group Anonymous https://guitarnoise.forum/sunday-songwriters-group/week-16-owa/#post-15746